Score: 7

"LOL"

submission: Super Slam

date: November 4, 2004

LOL....Agent Smith with the Casio synth.....Just classic. That alone gets a 5. Keep it going!!

Score: 9

"Further goodness"

submission: Xombie: Chapter 5 | Reel2

date: October 13, 2004

Some of the faults from the previous are negated here. Just when the series was about to get souped over with action we take a digression into plot. From what I see so far, this will be one of the pivotal episodes in the series. Too bad it had to be split into two parts. Again, James, you're doing great, masterful work. May your legacy on NG continue to grow!

Score: 8

"Good background"

submission: Xombie: Chapter 5 | Reel1

date: October 13, 2004

I liked how the series went into some background info on both Zoe and the Keeper. Wish there was more action, but all movies have their down time. Damn that robot for spying..LOL. A worthy continuation, James. I'm clicking Reel Two aleady!

Score: 8

"Neat Spoof"

submission: Pico's Unloaded

date: October 8, 2004

Pretty good spoof of the super burley brawl LMAO. Interesting cut scenes, a reload sequence halfway in would've been good. Overall, imressed as usual.

Score: 10

"Ahhh...."

submission: _FLU!(chapter10)

date: September 17, 2004

My my...quite the climatic change. Loved the "rope-a-dope" plot lining you used to lure us along. Like a good stalin, paracitically using those around him for his own gain. Much props to you on this masterful series. release more mars conspiracy parts...PWEESE?

Score: 9

"Excellent"

submission: _FLU!(chapter09)

date: September 17, 2004

Very climatic feeling to this part. Alas the two brothers face off. Semi-planes need so much maintenance, no? These episodes get better and better. The series is really getting fine tuned from the short clips at the start. bring on Ch. 10!

Score: 8

"Interesting change...."

submission: _FLU!(chapter08)

date: September 17, 2004

Hmmmmmm...so they now turn on Abel. Loved the twist. Cool plot advancement with the agents and Abel. Finally they bite the dust. I can't wait to see part 9. Sweet Job!

Score: 8

"Nice development"

submission: _FLU!(chapter07)

date: September 17, 2004

Good development of characters in this part. Cain contradicting orders.....hmmmmmm....It'll interesting to see how the two interact later on...LOL@ the sex scene. Continue the goodness....

Score: 9

"C & A"

submission: _FLU!(chapter06)

date: September 16, 2004

One of the best parts of the series so far. Excellent way to blend the action with the story development. Must suck to find out you're a clone...LOL Excellent work on this series!

Score: 8

"Like CH. 3"

submission: _FLU!(chapter05)

date: September 16, 2004

THought this was similar to chapter 3 in the length. I loved the action sequence you put forth though. Cain is a badass fighter. THos synthetics must be a dime a dozen. Look forward to more building of Cain's character......